Ready for another aaduna tease? You know you are!
Here are a few
unedited [mostly] excerpts from Gillick,
Murray, and Backer…three intriguing writers coming to the aaduna readership in the summer 2014 issue:
from Matt Gillick’s “Swim Practice”
Dad was supposed to pick me up on time but he
didn’t. He was late again. He’s always
on time right at five. Mom said he
sometimes took a long time putting on his green clothes and be late for his
flight when he left. I kind of wished he
lost them so he could stay longer and tell me jokes. They’re funny jokes like: “J.P., what happens
to a…” I forget the rest but I always
laugh at the end. The way he tells jokes
is funny but I’m not laughing at him. He
just tells them well like I knew I would understand if I were smarter. Mom told me not to laugh at kids at swim
practice, so I laugh at them in the locker room. One of them cried and I felt bad and I stopped
for a bit. She didn’t come back so I
couldn’t say sorry. Where was Dad? He didn’t have another flight to catch. I want Mom to tell me more about what Dad
does. I kind of know.
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from Mike Murray’s
“Stage Fright”
Everyone felt the closure of summer. Lila no longer heard the punctual cackles from her mom’s friends on Sunday nights while they killed a bottle of Sutter Home merlot on the porch. The air had begun to fill with the smell of burnt leaves during Lila’s walks home from school, on weekends the white smoke from charcoal grilled hamburgers floating leisurely through her neighborhood, riding on the sound of leaf blowers. The new beginnings of fall brought an omniscient sense of foreboding for Lila.
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from Tom Backer’s “Fear”
As Lila lay on the floor of the janitor’s
closet, running her fingers over the raised flesh on her face still hot from
being burned, she considered all the choices she’d made, not because she was
Jewish, but because other people knew she was Jewish. She couldn’t ignore the choked screams of the
dark figure next to her, who had curled herself into the fetal position. Her
screams became sobs.
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Everyone felt the closure of summer. Lila no longer heard the punctual cackles from her mom’s friends on Sunday nights while they killed a bottle of Sutter Home merlot on the porch. The air had begun to fill with the smell of burnt leaves during Lila’s walks home from school, on weekends the white smoke from charcoal grilled hamburgers floating leisurely through her neighborhood, riding on the sound of leaf blowers. The new beginnings of fall brought an omniscient sense of foreboding for Lila.
from Tom Backer’s “Fear”
I walk
away, push through the swinging doors to a short dark hallway, and then turn
the knob on the heavy metal door to the outside.
A grey limo, like a
whale out of water, stretches across the No Parking zone about thirty feet from
the entrance. Both doors on this side of
the main compartment are spread open, exposing a plush grey interior with two
six packs of Bud on the floor, the legs of a guy and a girl in the back seat
and those of a guy facing them.
My pool buddy, George,
stands off to the side smoking.
Short and trim, always
calm and dignified looking, he is black and his hair is just starting to grey
at the temples. There’s no cover charge
at the Wild Goose and he is recently retired so he spends most of his evenings
here, picking up free beers from chumps like me and some serious cash from guys
who think they are pool sharks. He
doesn’t seem to notice that there are a lot of girls walking around in very
abbreviated outfits, while I, despite what I said to the blonde with the nice
ass, am an easy mark for the girls and
my factory job doesn’t pay me enough to spend a lot of time here.
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